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Whipped's Fanfiction - Comments, etc.
by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:17 pm
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Who wants a teaser for the angsty story of the century?
07.01.08
Untitled Fic:
09.01.08
Fifteen Years
It was too big to post in here...
Who wants a teaser for the angsty story of the century?
07.01.08
Untitled Fic:
- Spoiler:
Prayer ~ The Scarlet Pimpernel
No, stay…
I don’t care what you’ve said or done
Don’t go away…
Not now when life has just begun
The way the two had parted had been as far from positive as one could get. The day that Phoenix walked in on Maya and Edgeworth kissing was still one of the most painful of his life. The betrayal stung him, that Maya would do that… he wouldn’t have thought it of her. The apologies were useless. They meant nothing to his broken heart, and yet… now that she was gone, his world seemed empty. She was gone and he had enough pride that the thought of chasing after her made him feel idiotic. It was over now, that was how the story ended, or so he would have thought. A case came in, he didn’t feel like taking it, but the desperation that the defendant displayed was enough to win him over. Despite his low mood, he arrived in court early. The defendant couldn’t have been more of a mess, the screaming and wailing at the loss of her husband reminded him that things could have been worse, much worse for him. The trial went smoothly, as smoothly as a messy case like that could go. The defendant found not guilty, Phoenix having done his job. He sighed, running his hand through his hair, defending opposite of Edgeworth had been a difficult task. Yet, strangely, in the deepest parts of himself… he was no longer bitter, no longer angry about the whole episode. He felt now as if he had overreacted, it was only a kiss, he knew that that was all that it was, yet he had thrown Maya onto the curb, something he soon began to regret. Life without her wasn’t complete, he sighed as he put his key into the door of his apartment. As he locked the door, he realized that it had been unlocked before. Warily, he unlocked the door and carefully entered the apartment. The one word he heard and the voice it belonged to made his heart stand still, “Nick…”
Somehow, together there was a stab in his heart, yet a lifting as well. As he looked over in the direction of the voice, his blue met with her brown. There was a silence between them, an uncomfortable one at that, but it wasn’t long ‘til he warily took her into his arms and vowed to never let her go again.
09.01.08
Fifteen Years
It was too big to post in here...
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Re: Whipped's Fanfiction - Comments, etc.
by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:20 pm
Teaser McTeaser
Head Canon Explanation:
The teaser
Head Canon Explanation:
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- Edgeworth is actually a deeply emotional person that just doesn't show it to the world... at least in certain situations he can be. ... there's my head canon.
The teaser
- Spoiler:
- Lounging comfortably in my airline seat, it occurs to me more apparently than usual that the flight from Germany to L.A. is a long and tedious one. The fact that I’m actually returning in the first place is a shock to me. It began with a seemingly urgent call.
“Edgey! You’ve got to come back! Nick is sick!”
“I remember the last time—“
“No, really. You have to come!”
“Fine…”
He sounded urgent, but I know Larry well enough to know the likelihood of dramatization is high. The fact that I’m actually returning shocks me, considering what happened the last time I saw Wright. That day is as fresh in my mind as if it were yesterday. Fifteen years later and the rejection feels as new as that day.
“Möchten Sie etwas zu trinken Herr Edgeworth?” The flight attendant asks me if I wish for a drink. Half of me wants to tell her to bring the strongest drink on board, but I’m a stronger man than that. “Nein, vielen Dank.” She nods at my refusal, giving me a sympathetic look before walking off. Odd… I’m never that transparent. I’m undoubtedly sure that Larry was just being a dramatic imbecile again. It was foolish of me to actually charter a private jet. On the off chance, though… why do I care either way after what happened the last time I saw that man? I shake my head at my own idiocy and bury my nose in a deep, complex book of court cases for the duration of the flight.
…
Standing at the door of Wright’s apartment, I realize now this was a foolish mistake. If I had any sense left in me, I would turn and leave right at this moment. A part of me genuinely wishes to see him again, though, no matter the hurt. After all, how could I blame him? I had been the fool that had opened myself up to him, told him how much he meant to me, how deeply I love him. Did I actually expect him to respond positively? If I did, I shouldn’t have. Had I given more thought to it, none of this would have happened. All Wright has ever done is bring unnecessary emotions to the surface for me. Lord knows how long I’ve been standing in front of this door. Enough of that.
“Mr. Edgeworth?” a man with odd antenna hair addresses me. Just like Wright to keep company with people with hair as odd, or in this case odder, than his. “Yes.”
“Come in, I’m sure Mr. Wright will want to see you right away.”
I doubt that. Perhaps I only came here out of obligation. Maybe if I keep telling myself that…
“Edgey! EDGEY! YOU CAME!” the dramatics could belong to no other than Larry.
“Yes, what is it now? Pnuemonia? The flu? Perhaps a broken leg?” I reply tersely. Tired, dragged down by jet lag, I’m not pleased to be here over what is most likely a small sniffle.
My terse reply is met with silence, uncomfortable ‘you could hear a pin drop’ silence. In that moment… I know, I realize something is incredibly wrong, that it wasn’t just Larry’s dramatics. Few times in my life have I felt the pain that consumes my body at this moment, the piercing realization that it hadn’t just been the dramatics, that something is truly wrong with Wright is enough to cause me to nearly double over in pain. Despite the hurt that he had caused me, I still love the man with every fiber of my being. My heart clenching in my chest, words and the breath that creates them seem to completely escape me. I can feel the eyes of the odd haired man and Larry on me and so I do my best to remained composed. I hate to show my emotions to the world, gnawing on my tongue, I half recover myself… enough to ask, “Where… where is he?” The odd haired man points in the direction of what I assume is Wright’s bedroom. After steadying myself emotionally, I make my way towards the door. I hear a laugh from inside and just the sound of it warms my heart. I recognize it, I know it is Wright’s… but I can hear a weakness in it, a weakness that puts a cold drift onto the warmness the laugh has caused and I clench my teeth, knocking on the door as I do.
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:25 pm
*wants more*
my part's the best, isn't it?
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:26 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:*wants more*my part's the best, isn't it?
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:28 pm
me too..WunderbarPhalanges wrote:.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:*wants more*my part's the best, isn't it?Yes, having proper German makes me feel smarter.
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by Aliucon Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:28 pm
...Wow.
Pretty cool!
Very emotional, but it was supposed to be so...
Pretty cool!
Very emotional, but it was supposed to be so...
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:29 pm
But blinq, it's your language... o.o
It is true. It should be an angst ball fried in angst oil and rolled in angst powder.
Aliucon wrote:...Wow.
Pretty cool!
Very emotional, but it was supposed to be so...
It is true. It should be an angst ball fried in angst oil and rolled in angst powder.
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:31 pm
I know.. XDWunderbarPhalanges wrote:But blinq, it's your language... o.o
but I can say I'm part of the story :gantdance:
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:31 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:I know.. XDWunderbarPhalanges wrote:But blinq, it's your language... o.o
but I can say I'm part of the story :gantdance:
"And thank you to blinq, for helping me not look like a foolish fool that Franziska would whip senseless"
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:33 pm
WunderbarPhalanges wrote:.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:I know.. XDWunderbarPhalanges wrote:But blinq, it's your language... o.o
but I can say I'm part of the story :gantdance:
"And thank you to blinq, for helping me not look like a foolish fool that Franziska would whip senseless"
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by Aliucon Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:33 pm
WunderbarPhalanges wrote:.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:I know.. XDWunderbarPhalanges wrote:But blinq, it's your language... o.o
but I can say I'm part of the story :gantdance:
"And thank you to blinq, for helping me not look like a foolish fool that Franziska would whip senseless"
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:33 pm
My mom is perplexed by the fact that I'm writing fanfics about gay guys.
I'm all, "But Mom, it's a popular pairing... and I like the pairing..." and she's just all, "... umkay..."
I'm all, "But Mom, it's a popular pairing... and I like the pairing..." and she's just all, "... umkay..."
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:35 pm
you should write about straight people 
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:35 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:you should write about straight people
I know my dear, it's on my list.
I'm just having a hard time coming up with an angsty Phoenix/Maya storyline.
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by Aliucon Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:37 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:you should write about straight people
I'm interested too...
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:39 pm
you should :yannifist:Aliucon wrote:.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:you should write about straight people
I'm interested too...
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:40 pm
The muse comes when the muse comes!
I've told her I want a P/M storyline... now I just wait.
... *waits*
... she can be a bitch sometimes...
I've told her I want a P/M storyline... now I just wait.
... *waits*
... she can be a bitch sometimes...
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by Aliucon Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:46 pm
You know, if there is to be a Phoenix/Maya fic of yours...it would be nice to use a Hobo Nick reencountering Maya plot or...something. I like Hobo Nick. 
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:47 pm
Aliucon wrote:You know, if there is to be a Phoenix/Maya fic of yours...it would be nice to use a Hobo Nick reencountering Maya plot or...something. I like Hobo Nick.
I love you.
But blinq wanted the flick, is it okay with you blinq?
I sent my full P/E angst fic to crouton... SO NERVOUS.
Edit: The flick, what the fuck?!
blinq wanted it to be just after 3-5
... flick...?
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:47 pm
I like him too..
but I liked old Phoenix better
but I liked old Phoenix better
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by WunderbarPhalanges Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:48 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:I like him too..
but I liked old Phoenix better
I kind of think Maya's return would kind of help him with that.
*still perplexed by the whole flick thing*
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by blinq Mon Jan 05, 2009 12:49 pm
.•°٭blinq٭°•. wrote:no.. not hobo
after gs3 :D
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