Re: Turnabout Whip.

by **Riu** Sun Dec 28, 2008 10:23 pm

"Get on brains" ?
That makes it sound like they're getting high or something....
LIVE ABOVE THE INFLUENCE! DON'T EAT BRAINS!

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Mon Dec 29, 2008 1:01 am

Riu wrote:-_-
yes, yes you did

You are so full of shit... Yanni

Aliucon wrote:Well, Wunder is naturally scary.
Ever since she and EmaSkye decided to get on brains, they became a little more scarier, even... o.o

If you aren't nice... I WON'T WHIP YOU ANYMORE!

by **Aliucon** Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:03 am

WunderbarPhalanges wrote:
If you aren't nice... I WON'T WHIP YOU ANYMORE!

I'll be nice! Promise!! ><#

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Mon Dec 29, 2008 7:10 am

Aliucon wrote:
WunderbarPhalanges wrote:
If you aren't nice... I WON'T WHIP YOU ANYMORE!

I'll be nice! Promise!! ><#

Buwhahaha. Yanni

by **Riu** Sat Jan 03, 2009 3:50 pm

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:44 pm

:takethatt:
Whipped

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:45 pm

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:48 pm

Oh, goodness, it was pretty lonely over here. D:

Whipped

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:48 pm

I had noticed that.

Whipped

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:51 pm

H-Heh.

I'm sorry I've missed so much, though.

Whipped

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:52 pm

No, you should be apologizing for how much you made me miss you!
Whipped

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:58 pm

How daaaare you leave me, Aliucon? Whipped

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:59 pm

O-Oh.

I'm sorry, then, my dear...I won't be out for that much time from now on...at least I'll try! Larry cries

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 4:59 pm

Aliucon wrote:O-Oh.

I'm sorry, then, my dear...I won't be out for that much time from now on...at least I'll try!

Either which way, you like a good whipping, eh?

Whipped

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:01 pm

Of course I do. Your whipping is just...sexy.

But I thought that was obvious now. o-o

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:01 pm

True.

Do you think an incredibly angsty dramatic fic is better in first or third person?

by **Aliucon** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:03 pm

Maybe first person? Writing about what "you" (the character) feels looks better to me than telling how the character is feeling from his outside.

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by **Riu** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:04 pm

I like 1st

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:05 pm

Yeah, I've written five pages... but reading through it... it just seems awkward and I can't help but think that it'd be less awkward in first.
Maybe combine and do first with two different characters? Yanni

by **Riu** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:08 pm

whichever is easier for you

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:09 pm

Well, I want to give this piece as much gut and angst as possible...
... third person just feels wrong. ><
I think I'll go with first.

by **Riu** Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:10 pm

I like 1st

by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:08 am

ALIUCON.

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by **WunderbarPhalanges** Sun Jan 04, 2009 11:30 am

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