Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
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Re: Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
I'm... inching my way there...
Buwha... inching. *slaps self*
Buwha... inching. *slaps self*
Re: Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
I'm just about there..........
exceprt:
Suddunly Godot grabbed Edgeworth from behind and dragged him over to the bed. Edgeworth felt cool metal touch his wrists and heard
a 'clink' noise, 'Handcuffs!?' he thought incrdeuously, 'What the Hell is Godot doing!?!?'
Godot chuckled and began to take the robe Edgeworth had put on earlier off.
all I've got in the "smut" part
exceprt:
Suddunly Godot grabbed Edgeworth from behind and dragged him over to the bed. Edgeworth felt cool metal touch his wrists and heard
a 'clink' noise, 'Handcuffs!?' he thought incrdeuously, 'What the Hell is Godot doing!?!?'
Godot chuckled and began to take the robe Edgeworth had put on earlier off.
all I've got in the "smut" part
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Re: Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
What? He has to contain him some how.
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.....
I think handcuffs are sexy
I think handcuffs are sexy
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.....
okay....
*is trying to write as fast as possible*
okay....
*is trying to write as fast as possible*
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I FINISHED!! MY FIRST SMUT!!!
I call it.....
"Of Cum and Coffee."
Is it good?
Point out any mistakes
I call it.....
"Of Cum and Coffee."
- Spoiler:
- Prosecutor Miles Edgeworth lay on his bed wearing his magenta silk pajamas. Already it was 9 oclock, he should have been up by now.
Still Edgeworth lay for a few more minutes, it was a Saturday, and he had no trials to go to today. Suddunly the doorbell rang.
Edgeworth stood up, put on his pink bathrobe and walked downstairs.
To Edgeworth's surprise the man at the door was no other than a Mr. Godot. "Ah, I wasn't excpecting you, ecspessially
so early. What can I do for you?" Edgeworth asked. "Oh, I thought I'd just drop in to say hi. heh heh." Godot chuckled.
Edgeworth stared at him confused for a moment then remembered his manners, "Oh! Here, why don't you come in for a cup of
coffee?" "Hmph, that'd be nice, I brought a couple thermoses with me but I already finished them on the way over."
The two men walked into Edgeworth's kitchen, Edgeworth started making the coffee.
When it was finished, Edgeworth asked Godot if he wanted any cream in his coffee. "Hmph, of course not. A cup of coffee is like
a court trial, a bitter fight but with an addicting thrill underneath. Cream is like the falsefied evidence that plauges our
court system today." Godot anwsered. "Oh, I didn't know you felt so strongly about... um, cream." Edgeworth said 'What a weirdo!'
is what he thought instead. After downing 10 cups of coffee Godot asked, "Can I see the rest of your house?" "Um, sure." Edgeworth said
shakily. Edgeworth didn't know how to act in Godot's presence, it was like he was a teenager again, suddunly struck with a crush on a
girl. 'Snap out of it Miles!' He told himself. "Ahem, right this way," Edgeworth said with more authority.
They took a tour around the house. "And finally, is my bedroom." announced Miles, stopping at the last door they had not yet entered.
Edgeworth opened the door revealing a well-kept room, the only thing off about it was the bed, it's sheets still ruffled from
Edgeworth sleeping there. "I'm surprised you only came over here to say hi, we aren't very good friends or anything." Edgeworth
said as they walked into the room. "Heh heh," Godot chuckled, "I didn't just come over to say hi..."
Suddunly Godot grabbed Edgeworth from behind and dragged him over to the bed. Edgeworth felt cool metal touch his wrists and heard
a 'clink' noise, 'Handcuffs!?' he thought incrdeuously, 'What the Hell is Godot doing!?!?'
Godot chuckled and began to take the robe Edgeworth had put on earlier off. "Hmph, you're going to enjoy this, or at
least I am." Godot whispered sexily into Edgeworth's ear. Godot then removed Edgeworth's shirt leaving him bare-chested. Godot
ran his hands up and down Edgeworth's muscled upper body. Godot leaned in and took Edgeworth in a deep, passionate kiss
Edgeworth finally stopped struggling and relaxed into the kiss. Godot stopped kissing him and said, "Good, good. You'll need
to be relaxed for what's to come." Godot's hands then went to Edgeworth's nipples, slowly stroking them, Edgeworth barely
suppresed a moan. Godot put his mouth on one of the harding buds and began to suck. Edgeworth gave in and let out a loud moan.
Godot reached down and grabbed Edgeworth's quickly hardening member and stroked it through the fabric. The friction made Edgeworth
moan even louder. Godot moved his head up and gave Edgeworth another kiss, then moved down to the waistline of Edgeworth's pants.
Edgeworth was so drowned in esctasy that he didn't even relize what was happening, Godot pulled down the magenta
pajama bottoms revealing Edgeworth's 8 inch boner. Godot leaned in and took the head in his mouth, swirling his tounge around it.
Then taking in more of it til he had the entire dick in his mouth. Godot began bobbing his head up and down, expertly sucking
Edgeworth off, twirling his tounge around the huge dick and making Edgeworth moan even more. Til finally Edgeworth felt a familiar
feeling in his loins and he began to gasp, "Ah! AH" Godot knew what was happening and soon Edgeworth came. Godot swallowed it all,
not spilling a drop, "The only thing I like drinking more than cum is coffee." He said and kissed Edgeworth once again. The taste of
cum and coffee was left in Edgeworth's mouth, it was the most unusually and utterly arousing taste. Edgeworth thought it was over
but Godot still had plans for him.....
Godot stood and quickly took off his shirt and pants, he was left only wearing a pair of breifs with a gigantic bulge in them.
Then he slowly pulled the underwear down, leaving him stark naked was a enormous 11 inch erection bobbing in midair. This scene
seemed to bring Edgeworth back to his senses, "Let me out of here this instant!!" He screamed. "I'm afraid I can't do that yet,
not til I'm through with you." Godot whispered back. Godot flipped Edgeworth onto his stomache and Godot postioned his giant cock
right outside Edgeworth's opening. Then Godot plunged his dick into Edgeworth. Edgeworth screamed, it felt like something was ripping
him in two! But as Godot began thrusting his hips back and forth the pain evaporated in to pleasure. Godot rammed his cock into
Edgeworth's prostate with each thrust, sending waves of pleasure throughout Edgey's body. Soon Godot's thrusts became faster and
faster, harder and harder til he came copiously into Edgeworth. He then lay panting next to Edgeworth who looked shellshocked.
Godot stood up, got dressed and unlocked Edgeworth's handcuffs while whispering in his ear, "I'll be back next week."
Is it good?
Point out any mistakes
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- Spoiler:
Paragraph two: especially
Paragraph 3: plagues
suddenly
Paragraph 4:
"And finally, this is my bedroom."
its sheets
Paragraph 5: incredulously
Paragraph 6: muscular (as opposed to muscled)
suppressed
I liked it.
Re: Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
good, it took me forever.
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Me too , goodnight
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I feel ashamed...I am a writer, and yet I guess I won't be posting any stories around here...mainly due to my lack of difficult Engilsh words, I guess...
I'll try someday, though...and I guess I'll ask Lida for help, in that event,
And Whip, don't worry, your angst looks OK. As long as it doesn't turn like a extremely depressing emo story, I'll read it. XD
Even though I don't really like Yaoi.
I'll try someday, though...and I guess I'll ask Lida for help, in that event,
And Whip, don't worry, your angst looks OK. As long as it doesn't turn like a extremely depressing emo story, I'll read it. XD
Even though I don't really like Yaoi.
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It'll probably be tasteful yaoi, though.
And you don't need to worry 'bout your English, love.
Hopefully Edgeworth won't sparkle... ... agh, horrifying thought.
And you don't need to worry 'bout your English, love.
Hopefully Edgeworth won't sparkle... ... agh, horrifying thought.
Re: Flirtabout H.U.G. Erotic Stories (R-rated)
I have to worry. Well, I say that I am a writer because I already wrote 10 stories with more than 3000/4000 words each (my first completed PW story is 14000 long, more or less), BUT all of them in Portuguese. I have confidence in my English skills to an extend. I feel like I can talk just fine, but write is a little difficulter...
Though I'll give it a shot. XD
Just don't expect Yaoi from me.
Though I'll give it a shot. XD
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English is a difficult language. ><
Even us native speakers find it difficult.
x_x There's so many rules, so many rules being broken.
... I sometimes wonder if English would be less confusing if there was still gender incorporated into it like so many other languages.
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I find English to be pretty easier than Portuguese, really. XD
But since Portuguese is my mother language, I guess I will never learn another language so well that it outshines my Portuguese...but I'm trying.
Besides, when I write, I'll ask the help of mywife friend Lida. She will hopefully correct and add some of those big words that I still can't us properly... x_x
The first thing I thought on doing for this thread was an Ema/Phoenix, because that's the pairing I support, but...I don't know why, I feel uneasy about posting it here now...if it turns out to be good, that is.
But since Portuguese is my mother language, I guess I will never learn another language so well that it outshines my Portuguese...but I'm trying.
Besides, when I write, I'll ask the help of my
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Really? I think English is a demon, personally. ><
Why do you feel uneasy about posting it here?
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Well, in matter of rules, I think Portuguese is way harder. I feel like I can mess with words way more easily in English...and I like messing with words. ò.o
What if it's bad, and EmaSkye gets upset? ><#
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